Here goes!
GLPS
nervous uneasy
straining shaking sobbing
EOP tests room blanket
comforting cuddling consoling
relaxed friendly
Home
Is it good??
I`d really like to know.
Diamente
hard ridiculous
humiliating envying embarrasing
words thesauraus diamond shape
trying thinking searching
anxious worried
Poems
I wrote a diamente poem about diamente poem!
Ha!
mother
cozy warm
smiling cooking helping
chef laugh humor computer
working playing loving
funny happy
father
There`s a couple more, but they are in my diary and Ms. Hughey has it now, so I`m sorry but I can`t post them. Aaaaah~
Was my poem good? I`d like to know. so please comment about my first-ever diamente poems!
Yes, these are excellent. You write very poetically. A diamante poem and about diamante poems.....very....ironic? I also like the first one a little, but it almost sounds like you don't like GLPS. I think you like it. Maybe you can write a more positive one.
답글삭제Keep up the good blogging and I hope I can give you a greencard.